102nd Virtual Poetry Circle
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Welcome to the 102nd Virtual Poetry Circle!
Remember, this is just for fun and is not meant to be stressful.
Keep in mind what Molly Peacock’s books suggested. Look at a line, a stanza, sentences, and images; describe what you like or don’t like; and offer an opinion. If you missed my review of her book, check it out here.
Also, sign up for the 2011 Fearless Poetry Reading Challenge because its simple; you only need to read 1 book of poetry. Please contribute to the growing list of 2011 Indie Lit Award Poetry Suggestions, visit the stops on the National Poetry Month Blog Tour from April.
From Ordinary Miracles by Erica Jong, which I reviewed earlier this week.
Because I Would Not Admit (page 67-9)
+++++And his dark secret love +++++Does thy life destroy. (William Blake)
Because I would not admit that I had nurtured an enemy within my breast--
a lover who wanted to gnaw my secret rose, a lover who wanted to press me between the covers of a book, then burn it, a lover-usurper who wanted to take my soul--
I nearly died, running my car upon rocks like a badly steered sloop, crashing into trees like a hurricane gale, burning my arms in ovens (when I thought I was only baking bread) . . . .
To admit the betrayal was worse than the fact of betrayal-- for I loved him as leaves love sun, turning my face to him, turning my hips, my womb to be filled with a dream of children, a dream of books & babies sprouting like leaves from a spring tree, a dream of trees that leaked blood instead of sap . . . .
The dream's the thing-- the dream we die for, turning our faces to the sun, eyes closed, never seeing it has gone out: dead star, it blazes coldly over a dead planet while we bask in its afterglow, now remembered in the mind.
He was fond of stars & telescopes; fond of machines, fond of building the most complex contraptions to scale the clouds. But Icarus flies near the sun with waxen wings, & does not think of gears or motors.
Trees rise up at him as he falls; the earth rushes to meet him like a lover raising her writhing hips; the wings weep their waxy tears & fall apart; the sun is hot on his face. But even as he falls he is in ecstasy; his sun has not gone out. Let me know your thoughts, ideas, feelings, impressions. Let’s have a great discussion…pick a line, pick an image, pick a sentence.
I’ve you missed the other Virtual Poetry Circles. It’s never too late to join the discussion.